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EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
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KODAK EASYSHARE Z710 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
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Oct 6, 2007, 6:22:55 AM
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dorothy by grace-note dorothy by grace-note

under the cream and satin sheet-
lies something rotten and something sweet;
stolen -thief- bloody shoes and sand
that Dorothy wore to wonderland.


jack- it's still nice and shiny, found it in a drawer. :)
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:iconjdipierro:
lol from the preview I thought they were bullets :P I'm a little disappointed :P Great shot either way!
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EllaCatticus Oct 7, 2007  Student Artisan Crafter
I really like that poem, by the way. You have created an effective eyeline using the chain and the cards (thay is what they are?) in the wavy line. this "line" brings the eye into the picture. The shoes as the subject are really good, the colour shines, but is dull, therefore not overpowering the picture and ruining the simplicity.
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:icongrace-note:
I'm glad you think the red is red enough...I'm going to try do another version with a brighter red and see what happens, but this is more of a shoe-red colour...?

:D
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:icondoublecrash:
I agree with :above:, the red should be more intense, IMO.

But to tell the WizOz story with a single photo is great. Graceful.

Funny: two comments with Woody Allen quotes one after the other... it has to have a meaning. :confused:
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:icongrace-note:
<s>Rubbish! I haven't had any woody allen quotes!</s>
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:icondoublecrash:
Haha. Gotcha. Look at the comment above mine.
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theshinyrock Oct 6, 2007
aw nice:)
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Lumix-DMC Oct 6, 2007
nice photo :D
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:icondresdenblue:
Mmm. Not clicking in my head - Dorothy wore sand? Referring to hourglass sand?

But prettyful. The gold kinda overwhelms the red, maybe if you desaturated the gold a bit so the ruby stands out? Not a lot, just a bit.

*hugs*
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:icongrace-note:
uh-uh, sand with the shoes. NOt all clean and stockingish, methinks.

-I'll go try. That comment's gone through abit.

Yeah. *hugs back*
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