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November Leaves by grace-note November Leaves by grace-note

November leaves, November leaves,
rotten gold on golden sleeves,
roses past the time of prose
of thyme and rhyme that naught compose-
November leaves, November leaves
An empty seat stolen by thieves
Whom took away what way there was
Of pause, black dresses and of gauze-

November leaves, November leaves
The day before that none believes.
For I still can’t, take there it grieves…
November leaves, November leaves.

Stupid jack.
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Pim-s Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2007
awesome shot, I love the concept and the simplicity.
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grace-note Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2007
Merci.
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Aimelle Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2007  Professional General Artist
different, yet unique and creative picture :thumbsup:
Just the title I would have put on top, centered (I find it distract interest and harmony from the subject). Great minimalist composition
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novafox Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
interesting concept of the jewlery and the loss of thier leaves during the fall.
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The-Flying-Fairy Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2007   Interface Designer
Very beautiful
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grace-note Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2007
Merci. :D
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The-Flying-Fairy Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2007   Interface Designer
:) you're very welcome
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AnthonyShea Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
agreed i really like the poem, and like your concept of visualizing it.
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grace-note Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2007
Meh, thankies muchness.
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dehouse42 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love your poem...and the photo is inspired...original...brilliant. You know I adore all your work, you are truly "The Amazing Grace" :worship:
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