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EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Model
KODAK EASYSHARE Z710 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
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1/203 second
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F/2.8
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Oct 19, 2007, 4:11:11 AM
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Minuet by grace-note Minuet by grace-note
Oh write a minuet, write one for me,
Make sure it’s three-four time, write it in D.
Give me a letter and draw me rose-
And all the things that a girl loves in bows-
Skipping like stones on the string and the floor,
Give me your picture to pin on my door.
Oh average and dulled in glitter of stages,
Someone to stand with me and turn all my pages,
Write me a past that is louder than mine,
Forget: in a minuet of three-four time.


:heart: Forced rhyme and cliche all in one- at least i've achieved *something*

Note: read the poem in the rhythm of a minuet, the last word on each line counting for the 2&3 beats as well, of the bar.

Imma thinks for you too, *Doublecrash
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curlycurlybear Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2007
Oh WOW that is Beautiful I love the picture and poem! Good Job!
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novafox Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do you like advertise your friends jelwery shop or make advertisements for them? Im sure they can benifit greatly for providing such unique subjects to include in your photography of still lifes.
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grace-note Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007
*grin* My friend is going to take over her dad's shops and whatnot, and she says I can do parttime photography for her. :P Mind you, I dont' think I'm going to get paid.

But no, not atm. I might badger her though...
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novafox Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Still a mutal gesture to help to keep your friend in business so she can continue to provide these great trinkets that I myself have never seen.
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grace-note Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007
*grin* I guess so. :P
Her father's a jeweler, so she's always laden with stuff. Lately, the new craze is Swarovski, so I should be spamming my gallery with some later on.
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Lumix-DMC Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2007
beautiful colors :love:
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nask23 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007
it's amazing i get a peaceful feeling from this shot
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grace-note Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007
Meh, thanks- I was trying to get the ';peaceful mood' moreover, content/fleeting/sunshine type...sort of...a little bit...?

geh.
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nask23 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2007
:)
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Doublecrash Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2007
Nuh. Now we can't underestimate the delicate preciousness of it all. The poem is danced on points, and the photo is not "easy-glitter" at all, but it stays much more at ease in the Tiffany's Breakfasts orbit.
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